tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-141151674921716750.post6104587920026437427..comments2023-03-24T04:48:45.809-07:00Comments on Language Is A Virus: ConscienceUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-141151674921716750.post-37879327783199792252011-05-21T00:27:48.949-07:002011-05-21T00:27:48.949-07:00Oh wow, I wasn't sure I remembered the origina...Oh wow, I wasn't sure I remembered the original piece, but two paragraphs in and I was! I still think the idea of separating soul and conscience from the body like this is really interesting, and you show the travails that arise from it rather well here. I hope that there's a more sinister reason for her soul amulet being missing, as something so important seems unlikely to be left behind just accidentally.<br />Oh, and I don't trust Jax-Sen in the slightest!<br />[Typo for you: you've got "dissention" for "descent" at the start of the last paragraph.]Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com