tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-141151674921716750.post3528687318421104596..comments2023-03-24T04:48:45.809-07:00Comments on Language Is A Virus: YellowUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-141151674921716750.post-14772855748718404692009-10-28T20:40:56.808-07:002009-10-28T20:40:56.808-07:00I on the other had got the feeling "you"...I on the other had got the feeling "you" were dead right away but knew you didn't know. Maybe it was the very familiar bright light. I did momentarily think hospital but that was short lived. <br />You definitely get in the head of someone who is trying to figure it all out very well.<br />I liked this a lot.Victoria JK Dunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01002803636069191866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-141151674921716750.post-54871314915588838072009-10-28T20:01:33.682-07:002009-10-28T20:01:33.682-07:00I was trying to take people in the journey and put...I was trying to take people in the journey and put the pieces together with the character. Not tell them where they are, let them figure it out as the character does. There is no cut and dry place where you are absolutely one place or the other. I was hoping after finding out she has died that some of the sentences would come together for the reader personally and fall into place.<br /><br />Looks like I just left you confused. Will have to try this approach another time.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06237138428325062807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-141151674921716750.post-9390226909602760722009-10-28T19:48:40.048-07:002009-10-28T19:48:40.048-07:00I am feeling a lot of feelings reading this. I am...I am feeling a lot of feelings reading this. I am not sure where to begin. At first, I felt like I was going through my vertigo again...your descriptions are amazing! To make me feel like you were describing my pain. How? Sheesh! What an amazing writer you are. Then, all those images, the brightness, the white colors, the yellow colors, the co-workers looking at you. I was next to you then. Then, the headlights, the car slamming on the brakes...I saw it. <br /><br />Then, you are dead? I'm not sure what happened at the end. Where were you at first? Where are you now? I got confused. I should just go back are reread it, instead of commenting, but I thought you'd be better served if I comment my first thoughts right away. <br /><br />Your descriptions still continue to blow me away. Awesome.Sheshehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02339114618356896311noreply@blogger.com